At some stanzas, there are a couple lines that I would suggest shortening a little . Like putting the words together ? Like :

Look what is on the inside?
Look what`s on the inside?

In my opinion, it would soudn better . But it`s only a suggestion . Anyways, fabulous . This is so true, and it sends out a good message . Beautifully done .
..__MiNDYY

This is an Amazing poem!
I like It, It's so true and means alot.
Keep It Up, I'm gonna read more of your poems =D
Love xo

That is so true. Your poems are very honest, I look foreward to reading more. :]

Great message. It had a pretty good flow going until the last stanza. Still a great read though. 5/5

marcella