Wow this is a powerfull poem,...I really felt like i was in the situation....so good job and bye the way thanx 4 the comment it really means alot

Wow, From my heart I am saying this!! This is the most amazing poem i have every read in my entire life!! Its so deep I loved the ending its so power full and gives out a strong message. It's so powerful It's like poison intoxicating me!!Sorry If my comment is long It's just that your poem is so good and it's very eyes catching!! I LOVE IT SOOOO MUCH!!! (P.S keep up the GREAT work)
xoxroxyxox (Sorry comment is quote long lol my bad but I can't help it; I can't seem to stop my fingers from typing more!!) WICKED POEM!!