Bloody hell. That's your first poem on here?

Damn. That's good. I was not expecting the passage through it to lead to death or the grave it is well written and flows well.

Jemma

I really liked this. It was very unique and that always makes a poem better than it already is. I hope this isn't true though, but I can relate to it 100% so if you ever need to talk, I'll listen. Marvelous piece.