Comments : Shhh... don't tell

  • 17 years ago

    by Leanne

    Awww such a sad yet sweet poem!
    This one i can definately relate to in most parts, especially this stanza

    You have her,
    and she has you.
    Great pain i endure,
    from you two.

    Great poem!
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by TheWorldFellNUWerentThere

    WOW!
    Just a great write.
    This reminds me of my ex's.
    Sorry to hear your loss.
    HOpe your better.
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Spidergirl Jess

    Pretty good. not as emotional as your others but still good. 5/5 =]

  • 17 years ago

    by Shae

    Great poem. That happens a lot! Its really sad...But on the other hand its sweet too. I loved reading it and not knowing where it was going to next!! 5/5
    ~Shae