Aw. This was so sweet. Wish you all the best!!

Take care.

-` Liz

Well grrrr i was all excited cuz i thought you wrote it all about me and then at the bottom when i seen jamar i juss about cried!...hahahaha lol jk. anyways i love this poem!

Awww this poem was so sweet!!
I wish i had someone to write a poem like this about :( lol
I hope your both happy together, great write :)
5/5

Very good poem michelle, loved the flow, perfect write, i give it a 5/5!!!! keep it up!!!!

This is so sweet!! i adore it! it's so nice that you could write something like this!! 5/5!

Forever*Yours

I can relate to the beginning of this poem and sometimes to the end as well. i love it though. it rhymes perfectly and it flows nicely.

How CUTE!!!! *in the moment* that was so sweet! 5/5!

Aww that was adorable! i stumbled in part of it, i think there was one or two lines that were a little off from the flow, but overall it was a good write, great job5/5

Aww, that is so sweet.
The context and set-up is brilliant. Its such a cute and loving piece.
The flow wasn't brilliant all the way through, but the love and heart within the poem made up for that.
very well done
love Tara-Kay
xxxxxx

Wow that was very nicely written. The flow was really good. I liked the repetition. Excellent Job. Keep up the wonderful work.

Peace, Joe

Wow - this is so close to a poem I wrote called "How it is - I love your way!" Good luck.

I really liked your poem and the words were well placed and well put. I look forward to reading more of your works this year, both new ones and ones you already have listed on the site… Keep up the good writes.

Woah the words were in great choice nice job

Beautiful. very beautiful. the name deffinetely suits the title. it made me smile to read this one, its always refreshing and nice to read about other people being in love keeps hope burning and makes feelings already felt get stronger. great job. 5/5 loved it.

Wow i love the way how u wrote this one! hmm very nice, its like my bf same saying those words.. very nice and it really sweet and great feeligs! keep on writing and keep it up 5/5

This is such a sweet poem.. i love the repetition throughout the entire poem.. it really helped the flow.. and i really loved the ending. amazing job!.. =)