Very pretty. Very endearing. Thank you for the incredibly nice comments on my poems! It means a bunch.
The one thing I noticed is that your second stanza doesn't rhyme like the rest. but hey...just a small thing. Good job!
Charisma*

A beautiful poem as always my dear

"shone like starts" = stars

hehe, but it made me smile. The whole poem is just so gorgeous. I love the whole angel motif.
Argh! I want you both to work it out so badly!
5/5
*Gem*

Great poem it was so lovely to read, it just seems so wrong that you two arent together, as im gathering from the poem and also the fact that Gem sed it hehe.
loved it as always =]
~*~Jen~*~

This is good! =) which poem did you want me to read... got to go! love ya much

Hiiiiii! I will write to you on a different e-mail. But I going to have to write that your name is Aaron on it cuz if my cuz sees a different person on there he'll get mad....lol So you're going to have to be Aaron from now on okay? lol Just work with me please... :-)

That was absolutely lovely. It's a beautiful poem. Keep writing and take care.
~kiesha

That's AMAZING! it's almost as if i'm right there at the event. every detail is sharp. gr8 job:)