Comments : When I am Lonely

  • 17 years ago

    by IdTakeABulletForYou

    Try to make the poem longer, but other than that, it's true.

    4/5
    ~Stephen White

  • 17 years ago

    by Marjan

    When I'm lonely...
    am I ever??!!

  • 17 years ago

    by tia

    Yeah thats good and sweet! i liked it!

  • 17 years ago

    by jason

    Short but good = ]

  • 17 years ago

    by WriterX

    Reminds me of one poem I wrote ages ago. But being lonely does not always mean the end of the world... it is also hope. And in a way freedom.

    WriterX

  • 17 years ago

    by Ellie

    Ok
    i guess