Comments : Death Bed

  • 17 years ago

    by David Wallace

    Beautiful work. Who was this poem dedicated 2?

  • 17 years ago

    by Tara

    Hey.. this poem is really good i like it ..u can write really good!

  • 17 years ago

    by Christie

    Nice poem. =) touching as always!
    i thought the words used to rhyme had been used by other people to much, but hey, theres only so many words in the english language, right? =P

    well keep writing,
    xxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Pete

    Really well written poem. Very nice work. So touching. 5/5