I did write a comment but its come missing i will comment again tommorow as i loved this poem

Wow!!!! oh my goodness! this poem was great..i love it! especially the end of it...great job!

I really enjoyed reading your poem. Take care Cindy

I like this(: it's really good. It's so nice i think it's my fav!! haha, gd job.

Wow! i really like your poem keep up the good work!!! i really like this line
"The wind whispers, calmly and softly
the news of your leave has reached me
you're gone, it says. quiet. and then the wind leaves"
keep it up!

The ending made this poem. perfect is the only word to descibe it

much love and many kisses,
bex

This was good overall i did not understand the whole scheem of it but nice job