Oooooooooo this is good i cant relate to this poem

Thats a nice poem!
i think u ment to say "throw" instead of "through"

over all i loved the poem!
keep it up!

I really like this poem. I wanted to rate it a 5, but didn't because I feel like it needs one more stanza/paragrah to wrap it up. i'm not an expert or anything, just my opinion. i think it's a great poem, though. good job!

Oh yeah that was good