Comments : Love and Fate.

  • 17 years ago

    by PS

    Great. it goes quickly, but it is filled with feeling. i love the repeition and the rhyming. its great

  • 17 years ago

    by x.Athame.x

    I love the repetition and how it reads. Wonderful piece. *5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Heba

    Great job. it really touched me
    thx 4 the ment bye the way. peace out