Comments : Sweet Sacrifice

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Great job on this Poem. Your discrption is so vivid. Excellent !

  • 17 years ago

    by x.Athame.x

    Wow, very dark and vivid description. Very nice job.

  • 17 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    This is damn too haunting, God i missed your poems.....this is really a powerful poem....

    Any minute they'll search your brain,
    Longing to press the button that says rewind

    this is really the best stanza...great write my friend

    all the best and take care

  • 16 years ago

    by Jessica Evelyn Maxwell

    Very well written.. awesome write :)

    -Jessyka-