This is a good one :) I REALLY ENJOY readin' your stuff... specialy erotic... 5/5
-Marina

I really like this. I can't wait for parts 3 and 4 :-)

I like your style. you should check out some of mine.

Yes sir, makin me hornyier by the minute lol cant wait to read next parts...AWSOME!

This is very nice i cant wait for part 3

I loved it

Wow this and the first one are very exotic, got me pretty horny :).. let me know when part 3 and 4 r out.

Haha i was just jokin about the horny thing if you didn't figure.. gosh im only 13! but the poem was very.. interesting

Ooooo thats a bit racy...
very great style of writing.
whens the nxt part comin?!!!
kat-x-

Ooh. very erotic!!! i loved! must check out your others bub

much love and many kisses,
bex

So hot, I love it! Keep it up ;)