Comments : Sweet Sixteen

  • 17 years ago

    by ibelievedhim

    Hell Yeah! This is like the bestest poem I ever read. I know how you feel, cuz my parents forgot my sweet 16. I hate how they always gotta be yelling, cuz then the neighbors think we crazy. I just wish they would stop pushing me around acting like I'm never good enough and I don't try at nothing I do. Oh, sorry...um, yeah. I thought this was a really good job. For me, it just flowed together and it seems like you got a gift with writing. So, don't ever stop writing, cuz trust me it helps you get through a lot of stuff. So, keep it up and I'm always here.