Aww that was really heart felt and showed lots of emotion i can relate to that, it seems that you did what was best which was at the time the right thing to do =]
i loved it =]
~*~Jen~*~

Love it! Keep up the amazing work...also you have to send me a hello at HowCouldThatBe@aol.com ttyl buh-bye!
Burning~Wings

This was an absolutely beautiful piece of work. Thank you for sharing it :)

Ok. first off, I LOVED this poem...all that it was saying was just so easy to relate to for me.
My only suggestion as far as structure goes....is that you end rhymes are repetitive. You use the word YOU a lot. And sometimes the rhymes...don't really rhyme. Like more and home. But I have to be honest. I truly liked the poem despite that. It was good and from the heart. Thanks for sharing, and thanks for all your nice comments, and much appreciated votes!
Charisma*

"I've never believed their petty lies,
I have my trust in you,
You were always honest,
That is why I love you."

She has to believe you love her K.
You've told her so many times through your beautiful words.
I'm ready to bang her head to knock some sense into her.
I know she's going through a lot right now but she needs to stop pushing you away.
When my nan died, i did the same to Marcus until he said something to me.
He said, "I know your hurting but if you let me in, we're a lot stronger together"
She needs to realise that!
5/5
*Gem*

Thank You for the comment! This poem is very good. I like the emotion, and the rhyming. It's great. Keep doing what you're doing! :D

I really liked this love hurts alot...but this poem was really good 5/5
*kaila*

Well said. the ending coaght my i:)