There's so much emotion in this, im so sorry you had to go through that. i really like the way you wrote this, ur an amazing writer! keep it up!

Forever*Yours

All i can say is wow n wat an excellent poem u have i give it a 5/5

Awwwww this is soooo sweet at the beginning and so sad at the end=[
but i really like it. great job!

Oo i liked it! really a nice poem, good wording and stuff, nice job. i liked where it ended, like how you showed how it used to be and now how it is. great job, you've got a talent, keep up the work.

Short but a beautiful poem, great job! 5/5

This is very good, i think you have alot of talent, i give it a 5/5!!! keep writng, your talented!!!