Hey hey hey i read this poem in the contest and i loved it. !!

the only problem i found then and the same as i fond now was the title in the poem. you did it wrong-
What is it a male ladybird is called..
IT^^ poohie. lol.

but i really truly loved this poem.
great job. you are a talented writer. =]

xxLauren

Loved it cos you really got it ad express it so feel,well done 5/5

Wow!
This was fantastic!
Original and unique in concept and the imagery yoused in this was astoudning.
I thought the flow worked well and I enjoyed the wording used.

Interesting title and idea for a poem.. cute .. not my favorite but.. the flow and rhyme are good it just didnt capture me