I love it!! i can relate the te poem alot!! its short i wanted more at the end!!

May I say..
Whoever gave you a 1 ..
Is stupid.
Lol.
I loved it.
Another mazin' poem, Lance.
Keep up the great work.

This poem was amazing!!!

No i'm not sure how to make it longer i guess i just really liked it and didn't want it to end!!!