Comments : Getting Over Him

  • 17 years ago

    by Bridget

    Hey kelley that poem was reall good! it's good to see that you are expressing yourself through poetry.. you're doing it really well too. I especially loved this verse "I don't know why i miss,
    It's not like i still love you.
    At least thats what i tell you,
    That's the lie i tell myself."

    .. but they were all amazing. Well done 5/5 :) xox

    p.s i would really appreciate it if you would return the favour of read/rate/commenting. People say they do but a lot of the time they don't! lol im not saying that you are one of them or anything though. Cheers :)

  • 16 years ago

    by TooLittleTooLate..♥

    I cannot love you,
    I'm not allowing myself.
    This past time you hurt me,
    Was really the last.

    Powerful stuff! =[ Sad though..
    Your a good writer..
    Keep it up!
    xxx