Good poem. I like the way you wrote it.

-Haven

It's kinda kool and a good work,liked to read keep it up 5/5

Awwwh, this was so0o sweet, this made me smile.
I thought you did a wonderful job at expressing yourself on this, and the imagery and wording, were again, fantastic.

Aww.. so cute.. i really like this .. great rhymes and perfect flow... super poem!