What a wonderful delcaration of your love. The words you use portray so well the beauty of love. I got lost in this poems beauty.

Awwww that's so sweet. Beautiful tribute to a lasting love. Well done!

WOW. This is one of the most beautiful poems I have ever read. A beautiful dedication of love put to rhyme. Impeccable piece. You are added to my favorites. I look forward to reading more of your work. Again an EXCELLENT JOB.100/5!!!!!!!!!

Your selection of words is really very effective...gives that extra punch...keep writing

all the best and take care

Well Ben? I have read this very carefully....my verdict......
I wish I had wrote this!! pick any two lines....enough said?
last three lines...how can you add to this......love is.

Great job... a beautifully penned poem a true masterpiece, and an excellent portrayal of your words. Very Nice

It was so enthralling. I felt my heart listening to the words and they understood somewhat, I love your poems. You can go so far, so keep going!

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