Comments : Stop Acting Buff

  • 17 years ago

    by FallingDownFast

    I really love this poem.. it says it all.. and I can conect with it so much.. its like you took the words out of my mouth!
    ♥

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    Loving the flow to this one, it's excellent.
    However it might read a lot better if you skip a line after each sentence and shift into small stanza's.
    But brilliant poem nontheless!
    5/5
    *Gem*