Short but deep! I like the simplicity!

Well, this is different, but it is still good, short but shows the feeling, i give it a 5/5!!!

That's pretty amazing. :) short and sweet. and are you the one that has a thing for the show naruto. if so comment back. :]] 5/5

Thank you^^

the show Naruto is okay, but there a lot of anime and manga I like better

This poem was short and sweet and right to the point. I am sure that you had lots of motivation to write this because you covered everything. You also see the situation from all sides which makes the poem better to relate to. I also like how in the ned you wrapped it up with something that relates to everything the poem had to offer. Keep writing, and great job!

Thanx, but my my writing days are over for now^^

Or not....