This poem shows alot of compassion and meaning.. i can relate =) butt try shorter lines and like a long poem if u know what i mean..

well check mine out too!

Really good! Shows feelings well. Great job. Maybe try taking it out of paragraph form, that might sounds really good. Keep it up! 5/5

~Kat~

Hey girl the wedding plans are gowing ok... Just glad that we are having our summers in October my German friend are com......to very happy the last time i saw her was almost 9 years ago in Atlanta (USA) we've met there and we loved the USA...very good memories. have a wonderful weekend for what's left of it.

now 11:32 pm time for me to go to bed... xxx

Good work on all your poems...keep it up

Great poem

Your poem should have a bit more structure but the words were beautifully written keep it up =)

Your poem should have a bit more structure but the words were beautifully written keep it up =)

You have been in my heart every hour, every minute and every second! --my favorite line!...lol..so true w. me...lol..comment back!! lol

I will make sure to comment that new poem lol...just tell me when its done...comment back!..lol

Lol..ok...take your time and just let me know
lol :p