WOW I like it so much Great piece every lines are filled with mixed emotions and are powerful that it speak the feeling that u really want to tell... KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK

I really liked this poem, your good!
Keep it up XxX

Wow. 5/5

I love this. A bittersweet and emotion filled write. It has a wonderful flow, and isn't too long, but isn't too horribly short either. Overall spectacular. *5/5
I particularly liked these lines. It sums the idea up pretty well in my opinion.'

"My hands are bleeding,
From holding on so tight.
Letting go is most painful,
Though I know it's only right."

Especially this stanzas i really liked

Your eyes have deceived me.
It wasn't filled with passion,
Nor with the slightest inkling
Of your deepest compassion

good job,keep it up 5/5