I love it when it rhymes, keep this up 5/5

Its good = ]

Good poem.
It had a good flow.
Good job 5/5

I really love this...wow

I loved it,
great poem
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5/5

p.s thanx 4 commenting :]
i rlly appreciate it

I liked the flow of this one. I really care more about the emotion and this poem wasnt lacking. 5/5