Good start and finish it up good... it was very sad =( 5/5

Its cool and rly nice

ps: i like the way u express ur feelings, mom always says that real poets are those who write their problem and feelings as poems and just cuz they dont wanna tell it to a person they tell it to a pen

Very discripted and powerfull poem, u rearly know how to put the emotions u feel into your writing

This is a great poem. Very deep and it made me feel some sort of pull at my heart. I dont really know wat ur goin' through by my friend does. her dad raped her last year. Good start and i cant wait 2 see wat else you think of! 5/5

Wow. that is really awesome.

Its short but has so much meaning.You chose the right words to express this one.5/5.
~Shareeda

Awww *hugs u* keep up the great work