Awww. pretty.

I feel that.. i live that.

Very sad, Stephanie. I'm sure it will get better.

Aw this is really sad. I liked the message and the idea it was heartbreaking however I think that if you added a few more metaphores and got rid of the me's and I's it would make it 10 times better.

Good poem
Work on puncutation, maybe?
But, otherwise great job, hun.
5/5

Btw, not EVERYONE is happy.
I'm sure you know that, but figured I'd go ahead and say so.
Life's hell, we just learn to deal with it, eh.
hoping there's something better waiting for us.

So sad but really good poem
love it very much.