Great description here. i liked the way you set it all out and made it.... end the way it did.

5/5 David

I really like how you end your poems its kind of like a cliff hanger and it leaves people wanting more nice job 5/5 keep up the great work

I hope this isn't about you... it probably is, all my poems are (in some way) about me... but this is really sad. i really hope you don't feel this way anymore...
great job with this!
5/5

Cuz she thinks shes a disgrace

*That was the only thing that bothered me. I would just use "cause". Other than that I thought you expressed this girls pain well. The imagery is flawless and makes me feel what she went through. I enjoyed reading this. Very nice work. Nik*