When i read this poem it reminded me of all the "what ifs" I had in my life too. I thought it was really sweet how you wrote it and very real too....

I thought this was very good, except for the flow. Impove your flow and cadence a little, and this would be an absolutely wonderful piece. *4/5

Really good i liked it and i thought it was a 5/5 .... i have feelings the same way and i know what you mean ... i you would like read mine ...

she is so scared, there is no one out there

I can certainly relate! If we really think about it, it's not love we fear. It's rejection and heartache we fear. I've been through a similar situation and I've been hurt as well, I think it's just a matter of opening our hearts to a new love. And no matter what happens, it's better to have loved than not loved at all. Great job with your poem! 5/5

David makes me sad! Do you understand what your poetry does to me? It's wonderfully written, and quite amazing, and I know the story behind it so I can understand it more. It's really good. If she knows what she'd be missin out on she'll accept you... absolutely she will. She has no reason not to... 5/5 (like always) Love you

Love Always
~Casey J.

Wow.........I can really relate to how you're feeling

don't worry. you're a great person and I know she'll figure that out :)

David are you really feeling this? I hope its not who I think its about. Well I know you can get so much better and thats the truth. Other then that I loved this poem! It had a great flow! I don't know what that one person was talking about! *5/5

This is great...i've felt like this about a guy that i was afraid to love..good job!

This ones great... its sad though

This poem had a great storyline that everyone can relate to. And you really played out all the questions that can run through your mind. That was good, but there were a couple suggestions I had.

Okay this stanza...
I've never been so scared,
so very scared of love.
A new road is always rare,
rejection is so hard to bare.

It doesn't rhyme like the rest. Love doesn't have a rhyme to go with it. And in some of your stanzas like the first one, some lines are just too long and break the flow of your poem. So I would work on that.
Still, good job!
Charisma*

This one is good too
weird though because your a guy .... lmao kidding
xD

Very well written i like your work and enjoy reading things for the other side of life. men. great job you sound like your a great guy from your poetry keep it up.