Hello ciao, its been awhile since you've writen a poem and this is very good, i love lyrics, this flows perfectly, i give it a 5/5!!! keep it up!!!

Wow..i really enjoyed reading this poem..i know exactly how you feel because i feel the same way.

Neat poem, neat style. Um, you did spell disaster wrong though. LOL just a little typo I thought I'd point out. But it was good. I like the brackets used around the last line, as if to reinforce in the readers mind exactly what he's doing as he's doing it. Very good!
Charisma*

Great poem 5/5 from me !

Hey cool poem
nice to see that people are still working toward good poetry
if u dont mind, could u please rate and comment my new poem THE LITTLE THINGS YOU DO
ill be sure to return the favor once u comment and rate
thanksss :)

This poem is full of emotion... It describes nicely the way that special someone can take over You... This flowed nicely and was a very enjoyable read... Well done 5/5 xx

I absolutely loved this so much, hence why it placed. i could relate to this just so much! it was like you wrote it for me! lol. and the use of words..were just. wow. left me drooling. lol. 10000/5 amazing work.

Ooh!...im not much for love poems any more but this was a fine piece...

Sometimes...ur poetry makes me felt lmao...

5/5

I meant melt lol

''Come rescue this Princess Distaster''

What a beatiful, original line!
That has to be my favourite part of the whole piece.
I liked the repetition, I thought that worked very well.
This was just so beautiful.

Oh Wow. Heartfelt. I wish I could tell Wesley this easyily. But I can't . Great write. 5/5