This was different. Ive never read a poem like that before, but i liked it! it was fun.

5/5
Allanah

PS youre going into my favorites!!!

Mm, I've never read a poem like this. Even though it is short, and simple it still evokes a beautiful image in the mind's eye. Beautiful job. *5/5

I really like poems about nature and this one is no exception. I find that the Nature section of Poems and Quotes is where some of the best poems are found. I like writing Love poems and find that I incorporate many nature themes into them. There are a lot of poems in the Love section but there are only a few that really shine where in the nature section I find the opposite. Most of them are very good. I enjoyed your poem and hope to read more from you in the future. If you like trees you can read a poem I wrote called The memory of my shadow. The poem Searching also has a nature theme - I wrote this way too long ago when I was a kid and have thought many times to rewrite it as an adult. But somethings are better left the way they are no matter how badly you wish to change them.