That is so awsome. That is how I feel about my man. Great Job
Sunshine

Fascinating. Again. Good title. Matches the structure of your poem and with the Continuation of the Previous Part I & II. I did not like the beggining. There was tension in my mind asking why "He" was so upset? As i continue reading. I finish. And I still dont know the Cause of why he was upset. Interpretation was left in the poem. But not enough information was in the poem so i can interpret the cause. So this is something i hope you avoid next time. Like always. Your emotions were seen in the poem. So again. Not excellent. But still good. Voted 4/5

Wow, im really speechless reading this poem, you are really a great writer and a great inspiration, i love this poem. keep it up. another 5/5 from me.

:] awwwww! 5/5