This poem is spectacular. The repetition was a perfect idea, and the concept....well, it (almost) made me cry.
Good job.

This poem is amazing. While I was reading it, it was like I was feeling fear mixed with regret....And yet I still felt calm. This is a great poem. Keep up the good work!

~Liana~

I like this piece a lot as well. Form really makes a poem, in my opinion. And I love the form in this piece, especially the repetition that occurs through each stanza. One suggestion that I do have, is about the last stanza.

I was murdered here
That's why my tree is red
I was murdered here
That's why I m dead

I would suggest, using 'that is' instead of 'that's', because it would help the flow by changing the sylables. Just a suggestion, take it if you like, or not if you like. My humble opinion. :) Best wishes and blessed be. *Athame

*5/5

God that is sad but awsome

will you read mine?

Hmmmmm.... I liked it and yes the repatition was a great idea although it was kinda sad and yet it was easy to read

Great work

-Gaige-