Awe. This started off so sweet and then the ending was so sad. Your rhythm and rhyme were good! Nice job!

Wow, i realli love this, simple and nice,
and i love how it ends, good job(:

After seeing your icon, "fat kids are harder to kidnap",and laughing uncontrollably, i couldn't help but check out one of your poems.!

Aww, that was such a cute poem with a sad ending. Rhyming didn't seem forced, your story was spelled out in this poem which is good. Great Job!

I really like this one. It has a lot of meaning. I love poems that have a story to them. :]

5/5