Comments : My gift

  • 17 years ago

    by Tricky Daze

    You know what it's really cool and sweet and i especially liked those

    A love that lasts through endless time
    A feeling to share it's yours' and mine
    A special bond no-one can brake
    A endless love no-one can take

    bUt a lil prob. here,brake-break
    Other than that so cute
    Keep it up
    Laura
    Ps:You're added in my favorites,i liked your style and want you to be a friend of mine of course if you accept it
    E-mail me to let me know
    Keep it up
    Laura

  • 17 years ago

    by SEAN

    A consistant cleverly written devotion to affection well done

  • 16 years ago

    by Lesbian Natalie

    This takes me to the times I have started new relationships...oh how happy the first kiss or the first time you make love is... Your poetry is awesome...