WOW! That was beautiful! You only have one stanza that doesn't rhyme, and I was like??? but it worked GREAT with the following stanza. This s one of the BEST love poems I've read of yours. One typo though

When not is disguise

I think is should be in.

Other than that, this poem had the best flow of any of yours. It really is good!
Charisma*

Lovely words...
really like it....

I think it's great. Honestly, though I'm a bit confused. Why did you ask, "what were you thinking when you first saw him?" cuz aren't you wanting to get into HIS mind..so wouldn't it be more like "what were you thinking when you first saw me?" I don't know, I think I'm misinterpreting it so would you please help out the hopeless blonde here and explain it to me? Thanks!
Charsima*

I thought this was great! I really loved it! And yes, I completely understand where you're coming from with this! Perfect rhyming and flow!
xoxo

I love it! I like the way you build up to wanting to know their thoughts, not wanting to see through their eyes. My favorite stanza is:
\"Let me feel the emotion
That drowns your mind
As you live every sensation
For the first time\"

Nice imagery- drowning in emotion.

And btw, in my \'snafu\' poem, snafu is an acronym that stands for \"situation normal all fouled up\" (or sometimes f*d up but ya know....) basically just that everythings always a mess.

Now that m'dear... is one amazing piece of poetry...
Seriously, it was so flawless, it flowed like water and the rhyming was fab!
Great words used as well.. so overall...
Wow.. lol
5/5
*Gem*