This poem seemed incomplete one more stanza to round it up would've made it better. I'm also confused about what this poem is actually about.

You did well with the rhythm of rhyme through out the poem though.

3/5

Could you please comment and vote on one of my poems pretty please :)

thank you,
Em

Well done. good rhyming keep it up. 5/5

Its good i like it umm cant think of anything else to put... o.o

I loved it :)
it was really well-written and the rhythm was good
*thumbs up* :)

Well I really liked it, wonderful job Sarah =] 5/5

Oh poor young lady this is a wonderful write but you must ba able to forgive in order for you to be able to move on.

sadaddy

Nicely written. I must say: I am deeply sorry if you are going through something like this. I can say I can relate... Good Job on the poem hun.

How very sad. Good job! Take care Cindy

Jeez all the fkn poems r bout love
way 2 be original!!

I'm sorry for your loss.
Good poem though. There are a lot of good poets on this website. You're one of them.
5/5

I really like this one!!! its so good your so creative. keep it up!!

This is a cute poem. and im really sorry for your loss if its true. but you have some mistakes. like "knifes" its "knives" and "Everytime you done it" uhm its gramatically incorrect. it should be did insted of done. and "Why didn't get help then" i think your missing a word.

but other then that. great job. just make sure you read your poems over and make sure there arent mistakes.

liz

What's all this sadness Sarahhh. Wheres the lovvvve.

5/5

Oh no!!! keep going! you left me on the edge cliff ahnger!! really though so such strong emotion shouldnt be stopped