I can definately relate to that... Good job...

RJ

I can relate to this poem a lot, but I feel you should skip a line there between "Always seeing barely talking" and "Unnoticed soul". I feel that would make it easier to digest. :-)

Otherwise; good poem.

-Kenneth aka Faceless Mirror

Aw.. this is soo sad.. but i really like it. its soo short and still comes across really strong in emotion.. its got a great flow and rhyme.. nice job!

Wow, this is simple and yet complex. A deep and interesting write. My favorite lines were

Broken up, but still walking,
Never leaving, although lost

I am able to relate to those, and think they are very well worded and conceptualized. *5/5

You just never cease to amaze me. This was flippin' great!! Lol. I really liked this a lot. Just 2 stanzas but a lot of people can relate to this. Excellent write! 5/5

-` Liz

Very very good poem

What a great little poem! Good job!

Sad

This is nice. i like , "Still deceiving with your laugh"

Wow short and to the point, very well written for such a short poem, and thtya shows a truely talented writer.

I love your poem..good job