Comments : ..*.hApPynEss?.*..

  • 17 years ago

    by Roxy

    Aww, That was a really good poem sad but some how it has a bit of reliance in it!! Another great poem!!! keep up the work i especially loved this stanza

    Remove the bracelets, and look for scars,
    even if their smile is bright like the stars.
    The self pity they i constantly feel, Checks the world into the reality that happiness isn't real.

    xoxroxyxox

  • 16 years ago

    by Cotton Candy Clouds

    Very good poem! The rhyme and flow are excellent your poem is very true i agree 100% again really good poem<33

  • 15 years ago

    by Mike Wilburn

    Happiness is missing, has anyone seen it?