Good job

This poem shows true emotion, it also has great sentence structure and flow. I love the content

Ah indian who are yah talking about tell me(winks is it me)....ok im serious now sothe imagry is nice the "bottomless sea" is a well done ^3^

Nice poem sis...the nice thing about anything is that there is always room for improvement...my only advice for this one...try and get things to run together more smoothely

-Bro-

Hey there you commented one of my poems about a year ago just thought id see what your up too now and its interesting too read, i really relate too this poem, as im finding life impossibly difficult at the moment, its comforting too hear your going through something similar x x

Nice work!
my petry hasnt been so great lately...
oh well,
do you know when the chat room will be open again?
I have'nt talked to ya in a while.

I absolutely loved this!

Hey this is a good peom very emotional i like it

That's a brilliantly written poem. Short, but filled with so much emotion. Keep up the good work...

Josie

Love it!
<3Amber

Wow...this poem really got to me...sometimes i feel like that. goodjob! 5/5

What better and flawless masterpiece do you have... this is great... 5/5

I love your work and how easily and beautifully you tie your emotions together into such a poem. I too have felt this way many times before...

Great Job! this is great