Hey this poem was really good.. i actually got really into the poem and so when it said it was just a dream i felt like really gutted for the person in this poem. where it says 'your mood turns to a glee' i don't think there is supposed 2 be an 'a' in there.. but i'm not completely sure so if you know that it is then just excuse me lol. great work 5/5 :)

Really good but ya say think alot
hahaha just had to dis ya a lil seein as how you did the same to me ;)

This happens to everyone.. GREAT poem man i enjoyed this =)