This is a really good poem, It shows so much luck and tender care for your lover although you have to leave her. Its really good and you captivated the theme!!
Great job hunnie!!
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Eric
THat is a great poem so expressive its sad but its good and it is so true so many ppl feel that way everyday its so real!!! Kepp up the good work never stop writting!!!

W.O.W. that honestly all i can say. its great emotional and it flows excelently. you cans ee you really love the girl. i hope she understood. LDR's r really hard. i know cuz i;ve been in a quite a few of them and they suck half the time. but hey pain is but yet another part of life. GREAT poem though. keep it up hun =]