Shriya, this is a great poem, you've inproved with the way you write them. Many people can relate to this poem since many people go through the same situations everyday.I think that this poem is deep and emotional considering how you feel. I know its not true but still,I wish you bwat luck with your life. Your best friend emily!! xox

Sorry i wrote it on your account XD sowwy!! My mistake!!
Your best friend EMILY!! lol

A gd poem but to make ur writing better i would write about something frome ur heart

Sad...very sad... i have missed u... ur writing is extremely deep... i love that