Go one again!!
5/5
God bless u

I think this is beautiful. The words you write for your love are wonderful! Take care Cindy

Ahhh so cute
i loved it nice work

Its a wonderful piece n what you will do 'for you' is perfectly mentioned. I think the line world calmness would be world's calmness. Just thought...k great piece 5/5

Awww this is sooooo beautiful 10/10

This is a great poem, definately used good expressions. well done!

Nazeer