Wow that was awsome. really deep 5/5 maybe u can read one of mine

That's nice... good job
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Amazing piece, wonderful choice of words. 5/5

Ending is simply beautiful. You said so many deep things with just a few words. Well done, it is so powerful and original poem, you put your self in to it and expressed emotions on truly great way. I love the way you wrote it. It deserves 5/5