Comments : My Lil Love Note

  • 16 years ago

    by Rachel

    Very cute poem! Well written and the rhymes fit perfectly, just like a puzzle :D I liked the first stanza:

    Hey babe,
    We've shared the good times and bad
    The happy times and sad
    The best times and worse
    And Ill always put you first

    Keep up the good work. I gave it a 5/5. Also I would LOVE it if you'd read some of my poems and comment/RATE them. Thanks A LOT!
    Rachel