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  • 17 years ago

    by keryn

    I dont usually like rhyming poems but i thought this one was carefully thought out and i ended up reading wiht rythu=m - a cross between old english and an african sort of rhythm! dont ask - i just did.
    love it
    x

  • 17 years ago

    by darkangelcrying

    Thank you,
    I have not written poetry in a while..
    and it took me 5 times to get this one the way i like. I am glad someonelse enjoyed it.

  • 17 years ago

    by thirstyvampiregirl

    I lkied it to dad(LOL) ;)

  • 17 years ago

    by your loving sistertwin

    Yeah "daddy"(winkwink), i liked it too(=)), i believe our daughter liked it- lol
    i love you baby