Nice poem, i loved the title and how those words fit so well within this poem. the thoughts you tried to portray went through well. keep up the good work.
sm:)e always.

Wow.. i really like this poem.. amazing job! very strong and beautifully written.. and thanks for the comment on my poem.. my friends who read it didnt understand it but you did lol :]P

Omg...i love it!
that is so good!!!
the last line is the best

xoxo kisses

Hey, great job on this poem. i really liked it. The meaning behind it was really stong and i liked the immagry you used. but i think the flow was just a little off in some places. but nonetheless it was really good :]

Excellent poem! i love this, it makes meh think of wut i would do...o.o;;; well great job!!!!! 5/5!!!!!

~*~Skye~*~

That's so cute, I love how you have put that, good work and i must say I LOVE ur picture.. its soo COOOL!

OMG my bf was telling me to do that last night and than i read your poem i can so relate to this poem this week good poem