Hey Awsome poem!!!! Wow the 2cd and last stanzas are really powerful!!!
Well done!
love Mel

This poem is probably one of my favorites of yours and what's more is that it is true. I see this happen all the time and its scary. People don't realize that what is on a person's outside is just a facade and I thought you really got that point across in the poem.
This was really well written and I loved this part the most:
"Save me please
From this hell of mine
Where the demons play
And the Devil dines. "

This was an awesome poem!
Astryd

"But instead they yell
Laugh at when I fall
Relish in their hatred
Despise my standing tall"

-I'll be honset with you; I was bullied at school. I don't know whether your story is true or not; but the comments I got everyday for almost two years were slowly breaking me. But I stood up tall, and as much as I was frightened to do so, it only helped boost my self esteem. Eventually, I was, you could say, the most popular kid in school because I put an end to their nonsense! :]

A well expressed piece, well done.

-Elysium.

''I'm said to be an ass
Yet I'm just misunderstood
If they got to know me
They'd realize I was good''

I adore that stanza.
I loved this, the first stanza was such a great opening, and the rest of the poem just got better and better.
This was frikken excellent!

I loved it! Especially the last stanza. And, the last two lines. Lol. I always love the ending of your poems. This poem got better with each stanza, just as most of your poetry does. The flow seemed a bit off in the first stanza, and the first stanza only. Other than that you did a great job.

Keep it up
<3 Teria.